Take my hand, lock my sights
Take my heart to higher heights
Make me yours, I'll make you mine
Transcending all, Bypassing time
I cannot lose, I will not fail
Jump the ledge, Jump this rail
Take what belongs in my embrace
See the smile creep on your face
The world means nothing without you
There's not a thing I would not do
To keep you here beside me now
I don't care when, I don't care how.
Love me for eternity
Watch me fall onto one knee
Say yes to this golden ring
And from the mountains I shall sing.
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Wrote this one shortly after Surrender. Quite an odd muse, to go from cynicism to romance. Whatevs, right?
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Although it may just be my tired brain speaking, but I'm reading it aloud and the third line in the last stanza sound awkward following "watch me fall onto one knee", it feels as if it needs another syllable to keep the rhythm flowing? Guh... it's late and my head is filled with prose and style. And grahhh.
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WATCH me FALL onTO one KNEE
SAY yes TO this GOLDen RING
And FROM the MOUNTains I shall SING
And yeah, that I in the last one is stressed.
It's supposed to be in Trochaic Tetrameter... or, rather, a strange mix of trochaic and iambic xD
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